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Author: | redsfan [ Wed Aug 10, 2011 4:32 pm ] |
Post subject: | Power Pros Book 1: Birth of a Legend |
FIRST 3 PAGES ARE UP!!!!! CH. 1 ORIENTATION Attachment: comics 006.JPG [ 81.65 KiB | Viewed 6541 times ] Attachment: comics 005.JPG [ 104.41 KiB | Viewed 6541 times ] Attachment: comics 007.JPG [ 89.81 KiB | Viewed 6541 times ] DO TEH POLL!!!!!! |
Author: | redsfan [ Wed Aug 10, 2011 4:37 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Power Pros Book 1: Birth of a Legend |
Any good, or not? Give me some feedback! |
Author: | Zumikaku [ Wed Aug 10, 2011 4:59 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Power Pros Book 1: Birth of a Legend |
I think there are some problems with continuity (if that's even the right word). Example: in the last page, they're talking about the car, then snickerdoodles, then the car again, then snickerdoodles again. I can't always tell which direction to read in. |
Author: | redsfan [ Wed Aug 10, 2011 5:04 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Power Pros Book 1: Birth of a Legend |
Zumikaku wrote: I think there are some problems with continuity (if that's even the right word). Example: in the last page, they're talking about the car, then snickerdoodles, then the car again, then snickerdoodles again. I can't always tell which direction to read in. Sorry, I don't know why we put that "nice car" thing with Marvin over his head. It kinda throws the page out of whack. And you're supposed to read the panels left to right, like an English book. Thx for the feedback. |
Author: | lanceberkman [ Wed Aug 10, 2011 5:29 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Power Pros Book 1: Birth of a Legend |
Have a few problems with reading small text at normal zoom. Pretty nice other than that. |
Author: | BrewersFuzz [ Thu Aug 11, 2011 12:50 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Power Pros Book 1: Birth of a Legend |
Yeah, I can't really read it. |
Author: | maccrash21 [ Thu Aug 11, 2011 3:12 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Power Pros Book 1: Birth of a Legend |
I can read it fine, don't know about anyone else. I really, really like it though. |
Author: | detroittigers15 [ Thu Aug 11, 2011 5:42 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Power Pros Book 1: Birth of a Legend |
Yeah, I can read it. |
Author: | Powerprosfan31 [ Thu Aug 11, 2011 11:45 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Power Pros Book 1: Birth of a Legend |
I think it's good. But sometimes the words get mushed up. Tip: Write the words first, and then bubble them |
Author: | redsfan [ Fri Aug 12, 2011 2:36 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Power Pros Book 1: Birth of a Legend |
Attachment: 005.JPG [ 246.98 KiB | Viewed 6461 times ] Attachment: 006.JPG [ 233.1 KiB | Viewed 6461 times ] Heh, Oh Marvin... |
Author: | Paul McCartney15 [ Fri Aug 12, 2011 2:44 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Power Pros Book 1: Birth of a Legend |
I like it. |
Author: | lanceberkman [ Fri Aug 12, 2011 2:56 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Power Pros Book 1: Birth of a Legend |
How could he do this to Miss Kate??? |
Author: | philliesfan134 [ Fri Aug 12, 2011 3:01 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Power Pros Book 1: Birth of a Legend |
lanceberkman wrote: How could he do this to Miss Kate??? How could he do this to snickerdoodles? ![]() |
Author: | Paul McCartney15 [ Fri Aug 12, 2011 3:24 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Power Pros Book 1: Birth of a Legend |
I love Miss Kate! I don't get why Marvin always has to be the weird nerd who is more one of Cheif's followers than his friends. |
Author: | redsfan [ Fri Aug 12, 2011 3:27 pm ] |
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