My newest book.

theppman · **Posted:** Thu Feb 26, 2009 10:05 am

^ Nope, its not. At all.

theppman · **Posted:** Thu Feb 26, 2009 6:25 pm

Heres the next bit!!!!
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The thin guard awoke from a restless night. He couldn't stop thinking about the man that had been killed. He'd wondered, if he had family and kids, and how they'd react to the news that their father or husband was a traitor.He;d considered turning himself in, but he knew that;d mean death, and he;d come too far to die. He'd been through so much, death, blood,loss,and pain, He knew, he couldn't let himself give up now.

theppman · **Posted:** Thu Feb 26, 2009 7:53 pm

Any1? No, nonone follows anymore?

dishnet34 · **Posted:** Thu Feb 26, 2009 7:54 pm

People are following, they're just not replying sometimes.

Anyways, this book is really good. I can't wait to see it on bookshelves. (If you can find an editor, publisher, etc.)

theppman · **Posted:** Fri Feb 27, 2009 1:42 pm

WHO WANTS MOOORRREE?

Longball714 · **Posted:** Fri Feb 27, 2009 2:16 pm

ME! ME! ME!

stevenjackson39 · **Posted:** Fri Feb 27, 2009 5:47 pm

Me.
great job so far.

theppman · **Posted:** Sat Feb 28, 2009 5:17 pm

OK! HERES MORE!!!

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As the thoughts of his mother careened through his mind, he countinued walking. The sun soon slowly set, and he decided he should set up camp, and make an attempt to get some sleep. He took of his amazingly heavy back pack, and propped himself up against it.He was worried how his un-known cousin was doing. He soon, drifted off to a sleep.

stevenjackson39 · **Posted:** Sat Feb 28, 2009 5:19 pm

good job there.
can't you give us just slightly bigger chunks, though?
2 paragraphs would do.

apple4960 · **Posted:** Sat Feb 28, 2009 5:53 pm

He's building anticipation. All good writers do it!

Nice job with this! This is really cool!

stevenjackson39 · **Posted:** Sat Feb 28, 2009 5:54 pm

i know, but the book's pace has slowed down tremendously and slightly unnecessarily as a result.
still a great job.

dishnet34 · **Posted:** Sun Mar 15, 2009 5:55 pm

I....haaaaaaate...cliiiiiiiffffffff...haaaangerrrrs....

theppman · **Posted:** Tue Mar 17, 2009 11:33 am

Gosh! I can't belive I've forgotten! So..Anyone want some more?

theppman · **Posted:** Tue Mar 17, 2009 5:17 pm

Anyone?No...ok.

stevenjackson39 · **Posted:** Tue Mar 17, 2009 5:19 pm

i do!
we all do, we just haven't commented yet.

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