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dishnet34 · **Posted:** Sat Nov 21, 2015 4:11 pm

Paul McCartney15 wrote:

dishnet34 wrote:

Fixed the formatting for the video on the post and quoted post.

Haha, thanks for looking out, dish.

And thank you, agent!

No problem, Paul. By the way, that was a pretty good video. Nice work.

Was one of the wrong names for Keegan being Kilian a little nod to the forum? If so, that's pretty clever.

BrewersFuzz · **Posted:** Sat Nov 21, 2015 4:16 pm

Wait my names in the video? <3

Can't wait to watch this lol

Kungfupandacam · **Posted:** Sat Nov 21, 2015 4:24 pm

Paul McCartney15 wrote:

As promised, here's that short film I've been working on!

That's got a 10 out of 10.

Paul McCartney15 · **Posted:** Sat Nov 21, 2015 4:29 pm

dishnet34 wrote:

Paul McCartney15 wrote:

dishnet34 wrote:

Fixed the formatting for the video on the post and quoted post.

Haha, thanks for looking out, dish.

And thank you, agent!

No problem, Paul. By the way, that was a pretty good video. Nice work.

Was one of the wrong names for Keegan being Kilian a little nod to the forum? If so, that's pretty clever.

Haha, I will say that Brewers is the only person I know with that name so perhaps.

Thanks again man.

philliesfan134 · **Posted:** Sat Nov 21, 2015 4:36 pm

I liked it, Chris. Acting could be more natural but that comes with the territory right? nevertheless I'm sure a lot of screenwriters could relate haha.

can I also say, you look amazingly more like Nick Foles than you ever did Lincecum :lol:

Kungfupandacam · **Posted:** Sat Nov 21, 2015 4:38 pm

philliesfan134 wrote:

I liked it, Chris. Acting could be more natural but that comes with the territory right? nevertheless I'm sure a lot of screenwriters could relate haha.

can I also say, you look amazingly more like Nick Foles than you ever did Lincecum :lol:

I acted in some plays. Let's see if I can post one

That was me as Alladin in guess what Alladin

GoTwins24 · **Posted:** Sat Nov 21, 2015 5:06 pm

Is that actually you? Pretty brave of you to sing in front of a whole crowd. I probably wouldn't.

jag123jg · **Posted:** Sat Nov 21, 2015 5:32 pm

Paul McCartney15 wrote:

As promised, here's that short film I've been working on!

Did you film that in a penthouse? (well for the most part of the film)

detroittigers15 · **Posted:** Sat Nov 21, 2015 6:38 pm

Great stuff, Paul! My notes:

- You're a much better actor than your Asian friend
- "Oh, really? Because Sony's looking for someone to do that" line would've been great with better delivery
- Your appearance and voice is great for a comedic actor
- 1:17 this music is awesome with the voiceover
- The actor playing your boss looks and sounds years younger than you which makes it seem weird
- You're a much better actor than your white friend
- "You're not Leonardo DiCaprio painting the Sistine Chapel" lol'd
- Your second white friend is a decent actor
- "...and killed himself because of how back my script is" lol'd
- "Alright Kilian" lol'd
- The "boss continually calls employee by wrong name" trope is still funny even though it's probably one of the oldest in the book
- Your third white friend is a decent actor
- J.D. Salinger got hostile really abruptly
- 9:15 SWEET KICK
- 9:33 That's a really expensive weapon you've got there
- I like the closing shot/music

Paul McCartney15 · **Posted:** Sat Nov 21, 2015 6:54 pm

detroittigers15 wrote:

Great stuff, Paul! My notes:

- You're a much better actor than your Asian friend
- "Oh, really? Because Sony's looking for someone to do that" line would've been great with better delivery
- Your appearance and voice is great for a comedic actor
- 1:17 this music is awesome with the voiceover
- The actor playing your boss looks and sounds years younger than you which makes it seem weird
- You're a much better actor than your white friend
- "You're not Leonardo DiCaprio painting the Sistine Chapel" lol'd
- Your second white friend is a decent actor
- "...and killed himself because of how back my script is" lol'd
- "Alright Kilian" lol'd
- The "boss continually calls employee by wrong name" trope is still funny even though it's probably one of the oldest in the book
- Your third white friend is a decent actor
- J.D. Salinger got hostile really abruptly
- 9:15 SWEET KICK
- 9:33 That's a really expensive weapon you've got there
- I like the closing shot/music

Haha thank you for your notes man.

The consensus on acting seems to be:
1.) Third white friend
2.) Second white friend
3.) Asian friend
4.) 1st white friend.

And I agree that the role of the boss was a miscast, but oh well. The weapon was actually some pipe or whatever that we found in the attic of our tv studio.

Thanks a bunch for all the feedback guys!

jag123jg · **Posted:** Sat Nov 21, 2015 6:56 pm

Paul McCartney15 wrote:

The weapon was actually some pipe or whatever that we found in the attic of our tv studio.

ahh okay (going back to my question)

Paul McCartney15 · **Posted:** Sat Nov 21, 2015 6:56 pm

philliesfan134 wrote:

I liked it, Chris. Acting could be more natural but that comes with the territory right? nevertheless I'm sure a lot of screenwriters could relate haha.

can I also say, you look amazingly more like Nick Foles than you ever did Lincecum :lol:

Oh man if only I had a dime for every time I heard the Nick Foles comparison, haha. :lol:

detroittigers15 · **Posted:** Sat Nov 21, 2015 6:59 pm

Paul McCartney15 wrote:

The weapon was actually some pipe or whatever that we found in the attic of our tv studio.

I was referring to when Keegan decided the best way to kill J.D. Salinger was with a laptop

Paul McCartney15 · **Posted:** Sat Nov 21, 2015 8:00 pm

detroittigers15 wrote:

Paul McCartney15 wrote:

The weapon was actually some pipe or whatever that we found in the attic of our tv studio.

I was referring to when Keegan decided the best way to kill J.D. Salinger was with a laptop

Oh hahaha silly me. Yeah that was a donation from some tech person in the school. Very fun to break that thing. :lol:

Zumikaku · **Posted:** Sat Nov 21, 2015 11:26 pm

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You're not Leonardo DiCaprio painting the Sistine Chapel.

Oh god why am I laughing so hard? :lol:

The movie was great, paul! I did feel like the ending left me hanging, though. What happened? What were those drugs? Where can I get some?

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